出国留学的利弊英语作文(5.21大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析：每个人拥有家电和汽车的利弊)

5.21大陆雅思大作文7分范文及剖析：每一局部拥有家电和汽车的利害

利害类大作文，社会类话题

It is suggested that everyone in the world should have a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

标题泉源：2022年5月21日大陆雅思大作文（反复2010年4月24日大陆考题）

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标题大意

有人发起天下上每一局部都应该有效一辆汽车、一台冰箱和电视，你以为利害怎样？

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思绪剖析

这是一道利害类大作文，讨论的是每一局部都拥有汽车、冰箱和电视的利害。利害类文章必要重申在论证上体现公道性，即在具体的分析中，明白能体现出一边的叙述的确是大于另一边，或是利害均等，而利害对否有压服力并不取决于看法的数目，而是内容对否有压服力。标题了解上不难，底下月半鸭带各位来看下具体看法。

起首来看利益，有两方面。

一是可以极大的改良人们的生存质量。电视性可以丰厚人们的文娱生存；冰箱让食材特别是肉类和水产储存更久；汽车则能让人出行愈加便利，不会遭到天气或公用交通不敷的影响。每一局部都市渴望让本人的生存变得更好，因此让人们能拥有这些东西是利于一局部的。

二是有利于经济提高。家电和汽车的需求增长会促使厂家有动力举行消费以增长营收，历程中可以创造多量事情岗亭。同时，消耗者和商家的买卖历程中也能为当局带来GDP和税收，进而使得当局有更多资金可以投入各个范畴的建立和研讨。

然厥后看坏处，这里分散给出利大于弊（前者）和弊大于利（后者）两种思绪下的弊端

多量的电器和汽车，会带来情况沾染成绩和动力斲丧成绩。这些装备想要正常运作必要斲丧多量的煤炭和石油，这会增重动力包袱，同时燃油汽车也会排放废气，进而招致温室效应对情况形成毁坏。（但随着科技提高，更多干净动力和科技的运用使得这个成绩可以取得改良，好比太阳能发电和电动汽车。）

弊大于利的话必要扣在everyone上，假如每一局部都拥有电视、冰箱和汽车，那将是一个十分宏大的数目。即使动力和废气排放可以处理，但制造这些商品就必要投入巨额的质料，并且迭代历程中还会产生多量难以处理的废弃渣滓。同时，每一局部都拥有汽车关于都市的路途体系也会是个宏大磨练，特别是在多数会中，过多的私人车运转约莫会遭严峻的路途壅闭乃至瘫痪，乃至约莫都没有充足空间用于泊车。（以上海为例，现在私人车约莫有350万辆，就以前充足形成路途拥堵了，假如按上海生齿2400万人，每人一辆那就是现在数目标近7倍……）

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提要

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高分范文示例

It is universally accepted that everyone needs a car, a TV, and a fridge to make life more convenient. Though using these facilities may be advantageous for the general public, I personally believe that the potential harm outweighs the advantages.

It can be justified that possessing these facilities brings several benefits to everyday life. Firstly, they help raise people’s standards of living by making life more comfortable. Compared with the past decades when recreational activities were quite limited, the advent of television enriches people’s lives through providing them with greater entertainment. Meanwhile, travelling by private vehicle makes it possible for individuals to enjoy great freedom in planning routes, timing and destinations. In addition, refrigerators help preserve food stuffs so that people who are fully occupied can have easy access to leftovers as food can maintain its natural appearance and nutritive value in the fridge. Secondly, a growing demand for these possessions stimulates production and generates more income for the companies. In the long run, such consumption would further contribute to the national economy, through which governments would be able to accumulate significant tax revenues to subsidize projects that benefit the whole population.

However, a heavy dependence on vehicles and appliances may pose a threat to both the environment and the well-being of the general public. For one thing, having too many vehicles on the roads is likely to cause traffic congestion, and this would also be a major producer of toxic emissions that aggravate environmental pollution and harm people’s health. For another, the manufacturing of automobiles, refrigerators and televisions necessitates a significant amount of resources. Therefore, if every single individual has a demand for these facilities, it would result in massive energy consumption that may be beyond what the globe could offer. Moreover, although environmental concerns may be addressed through technological advancement, energy depletion is by no means reversible.

In conclusion, the possession of cars, TVs, and fridges could bring both benefits and drawbacks, but the negative impacts seem to be more impressive.

范文作者：张乔西

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干系词汇和语法布局

Standard of living 生存水平

Recreational activities 文娱活动

Tax revenue 税收收入

Toxic emissions 废气排放

Aggravate 加剧