出国留学的利弊英文作文(9月24日雅思大作文示范写作 | 机器人的利弊)

9月24日雅思大作文树模写作 | 机器人的利害

2022年9月24日雅思大作文标题

Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

范文及剖析

Introduction

The artificial intelligence is witnessing game-changing development. While some argue that it may pose a threat to human beings and stall social progress, I entertain the view that it will make a huge difference to our future development.

剖析

2011年的老题，审题上有一些易错点：some的看法落在紧张词组future development，也就是写一些当下的利益而没有体现将来情况的都是跑题，好比：听从增高、便宜，且叙述均以“寻常如今时为主”，也没有特别指出将来的时间点。others的看法落在dangerous，仅有对人的生命形成要挟的，才干被称为“伤害的”。因此，对社会的负面影响单纯落在“失业率增长”等老生常谈的看法上，是稍微跑题的。

? game-changing adj. 厘革性的

? stall vt. 延误

? entertain vt. 持有，怀有

Body 1

Of all the potential losses, safety issues are the immediate concern. To illustrate, as the working environment is extremely complex when robots are in use, designers may be unable to take all factors into consideration or precisely predict every possible accident. As a result, machines driven by the encoded programs are less likely to react accurately when emergencies pop up, thus incurring heavy casualties. For instance, there have been several reports about the malfunction of the AI technology installed in transport or manufacturing industry. However, with repeated tests and regular overhaul, those risks can be reduced. The automation technology is believed to eventually reach the high level of accuracy, precision, and sophistication.

剖析

让步-伤害：计划职员对繁复的实践使用的猜测有一定的范围性 à 已编纂并主动运转的机器装备约莫无法应对真原形况 à 约莫形成职员伤亡；// 反驳：多次实行模仿，武艺提高，可以低落风险

? precisely adv. 准确地

? encode vt. 编程

? pop up vi. 忽然显现

? casualty n.[C] 伤亡职员

? malfunction n.[U] 出妨碍

? install vt. 安装

? overhaul n.[U] 查验

? sophistication n.[U] 精密度

Body 2

On the other hand, the machine learning technology matters a great deal to the future development of mankind. To commence, such technology can uproot the problem brought by the ageing population. Owing to the longevity of pensioners and lower birth rate, an increasing number of countries, especially developed ones, are plagued by inadequate labor force, and such insufficiency is projected to be intensifying in the future. In this case, robots can act as eligible workers and well perform sundry tasks in workplace even with less faults. Besides, people will lead a more convenient life, with intelligent machines to offer 24-hour services, which will reduce and costs of employing more staff to work in turn and meanwhile motivate people to engage themselves in more advanced fields.

剖析

立论-对将来提高的利益：（1）一些国度生齿老龄化成绩在将来约莫加剧，机器人可以充任劳作力；（2）提供24小时办事

? uproot vt. 根除

? plague vr. 困扰

? intensify vt. 加剧

? eligible adj. 及格的

Conclusion

In a nutshell, artificial intelligence, negative social impacts though it may bring, will play an indispensable role in future development.

剖析

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